"Well," thought Jack,"Its not my dress and if Sally whant a Red dress she can have one. Maybe I can convince her that purple would would be a better color..."
"What do you think of this dress pattern?" Asked Sally as she pulled out 2 pieces of paper with a dress patterns on it."So what do you think?"
"That one there", said Jack,"Is very lovely!" Jack picked out a very regular and formal dress. It had lots of lace and a had beautiful vail! "Sally don't you think that red is over worn... becuase purple and green and what about blue they're all pretty"
"I liked that dress too!", Said Sally,"And acutully red can't be over worn because the only one who wears red in this hole town is Lock! I'm wearing a red and white dress!"
"Hi guys how do I look?",Asked Raven as her and the doctor walked in the room. Rsavn was wearing a black and red long sleeved shirt with a black full length skirt.
"Not red again," thought Jack,"oh well its tome to leave anyway"
"WOW Raven you look so nice!," cried Sally.
"You think? Thank you!!!!" cried back Raven, she was very excited with her new clothes and to see her older brother.
"Well its time to go we'll see ya'll later!" said Jack as he lead Raven out the door.
"Raven I'm so glad to see you! where were you all these years anyway?" asked Jack as the two headed home.
"Well Oogie hid me in the next town over Nightmare City! And while I was gone I met this really nice and hot guy named Grim he's the Grim Reapper!"
"Did you even know that the Grim lived here and in that City of yours? Becuase we used to go to school together! Anyway are you going to stay in Halloween town long?"
"He lives here? But we were going out for 2 years!"
"Oh really and here he comes now"
"Raven!" said Grim running up to her,"I'm glad I found you!"
"how come you never told me you lived here?" Quistioned Raven.
"First of all I was visting my parents." He responded.
"OH and I guess I shouldn't have been so mean. So what did you want to ask me?"
"Well Raven we'd been going out for 2 years now and I was wandering," Grim nelt down (you know were this is going!) and said,"Raven will you marry me?"
~~* Well end of chapter and I can't decide if Raven should say yes or no. So tell me what you think Please comment!!!*~~